Poetry Spotlight: Brittany Cominos

"My poetry, like most of my habits, is the product of fixating on things until they don't bother me anymore."

Poetry tends to come from a place of inspiration, and that is the worst place for it to stay. It's the attention to detail that elevates it to a craft. Most people aren't willing to put in the work to bring around the final product. 

Brittany has always gone above and beyond the call of craft for as long as I've known her. Her dedication and attention to detail show in the strength of her lines and sonics, building powerful rooms of memory that one steps into cleanly. Like any other writer born below the Mason-Dixon, her work is full of the hot pressure of the South and the concerns of home. We're proud to be presenting three of her new poems here at Little Death. 

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Begins, and begins, and begins

In the peach dawn glow
find me half destroyed 
by the way you placed
your hand on the wheel; 
smooth and familiar,
how I hoped to be.

On the front porch,
you laid out like a map.
I imagined you
were full of promise,
knowing that my favorite
places would always
remember you better.

Haunted by your soft 
spot for spines and storms. 
All those languid landscapes, 
all those dried flowers
on your mantle, rose-
colored memories 
spoil in your palm.

Elegy for Inaction

  1. Lost on our way
    to the Blue Ridge tunnel
    on the coldest day of the year,
    climbing mountains heavy
    with purpose. I got tangled
    up in bittersweet when I strayed
    from the trail and used it
    as a florid metaphor
    in my goodbye letter.

     

  2. I remember your library
    like stagnant water breeding
    mosquitoes and I refuse to envy
    your surplus of self-control. So
    I send Rilke quotes from Seattle,
    The transformed speaks
    only to relinquishers.  
    All holders-on are stranglers.
    Words stretching out
    like olive branches;
    I continue to identify
    as the dark circles
    under your eyes.

     

  3. I am the Rotunda and I am Monticello
    with kudzu wrapped around my throat
    and creeper clinging to my ankles.
    That kind of strength and growth take time,
    I know, but standing in front of you
    like the Corinthian columns that raised me,
    triumphant roots reach new depths.



     

    Gather
     

    Yet why not say what happened?
    Pray for the grace of accuracy
    Vermeer gave to the sun’s illumination
    stealing like the tide across a map
    to his girl solid with yearning.

    -Robert Lowell
     

    You can find me every Sunday morning 
    praying for the grace of accuracy, 
    as I gather words to drape over  
    the monument we built to seventeen. 
    Letting honeysuckle and lemonade  
    go straight to our heads, performances
    of romance, hands Crusoeing in the tall grass. 

    Your thighs are gentle like gardenias  
    and looking at you must be what it’s like 
    to discover an entire patch 
    of four leaf clovers. Unlike me, you stick 
    around, clinging like Virginia creeper 
    to the waists of a late afternoon shadow 
    or the chimney of your childhood home.

    Honey, you are like peaches in July—  
    maybe softer and sweeter but bruising   
    just as easy.  Sweating in the soft  
    morning, we murmur like bumblebees. 
    Exhale violets and daffodils and make out  
    overgrown tomato plants through sunshine  
    and mason jars on your windowsill.